Good deal ill take a look at those. I got 4 days off CSS coming up in a few weeks so hopefully I can get the corrections I need there.
I learned HVAC the wrong way and spent 5 years relearning the proper way! That line resonates with me well...:thumbup
Jacob: Find one coach and stick with them. Don't keep coming here and asking a bunch of people you haven't ridden with or know their quality level what's what with the entirety of your riding. I say that not to be cruel, but because I know you're seeking improvement in a short(er) period of time and that can only be done at the track and with $$. You'll get good responses here, but you'll also get bad responses (for your riding style). The only way to tell how you ride and your weaknesses is really, to ride with you.
So that being said, while the internet can fix small problems, I don't think it'll be able to fix your bad habits in short time and without confusion. All I can add is:
1. Breath
2. Keep your eyes up and moving. Practice this driving to work.
3. pay attention to tension. Don't worry about body positioning; worry about your body tension
4. Video. Video is great for when you've improved to compare and see where you've improved. It's not the best for online commentary when it's onboard.
Other than that, schedule some trackdays and find someone to ride with. It'll be the best thing you've done yet. If you need names, we know the right people here, depending on budget.