Video series reflecting on MotoAmerica

[KazMan]

Some of you may, or may not, know Gray Pham. He was an up and coming young racer out of SoCal and eventually made the tough decision that school was more important. Well he has been building his skills as a video journalist and has just released Episode 1 from his GP Industries label.


youtu.be/RGEIGpa5qNA

Episode 2


youtu.be/r7iqAxPVeMc

 

[budman]

Very cool.

Look forward to more. :thumbup

 

[89fj]

tried to watch
annoying background music

 

[ejv]

Tried to watch, couldn't handle the narration. He would definitely benefit from some voice classes if he hasn't been taking some already. Voice for performance etc. The video minus the narration was pretty good though.

 

[Smash Allen]

Enjoyed it and looking forward to more :thumbup :ride

 

[afm199]

Boring

 

[firstbuell]

Boring

tough crowd, with the previous "bad music" & "bad narration" comments.....

OK, I'll watch & then add my invaluable 2-cents

 

[KazMan]

Episode 2 is up!

Well I'm sure Gray would appreciate feedback as he pushes his way forward into a hostile cold world :teeth In all seriousness, I have/will forward any comments provided.

Episode 2 has been published.


youtu.be/r7iqAxPVeMc

 

[dtrides]

I enjoyed them, thanks!
DT

 

[peterhively]

Good stuff!

 

[firstbuell]

Well I'm sure Gray would appreciate feedback as he pushes his way forward into a hostile cold world :teeth In all seriousness, I have/will forward any comments provided.

Episode 2 has been published.


youtu.be/r7iqAxPVeMc

well, it took me a while - here are my post-viewing comments:

(1) narration content is good, useful - more of it & less of
(2) the music, which is a shade loud, simply too present
(3) vocabulary & grammar shortcomings, EZ to edit for improvement
(4) duration of vids is good
(5) minimal fx, mebbe a few more (Daytona road course in red inside
Speedway overhead foto was great)

Gray, keep at it!

 

[squidworth]

a good mic, popper stopper, and a compression/limiter to clean up vocal recordings would be my suggestion.

 

[Smash Allen]

Turn up the volume on the narration and turn down the volume on the music, other than that I enjoy watching them :thumbup